/vpwt/, I have a request. As you can see in the recap
>>36264416, I rewrote one of my stories, "The Seeker's Tale", and posted it last thread
>>36227303. However, nobody gave me any feedback on it before the thread ended.
I don't want to sound pushy, but I'd really appreciate it if anyone could look at the story and give some critique. I'd like to know what I did right or wrong, and how I can improve my writing.
