>>12858915If you're going to submit something for others to see, you should take a few seconds to make sure it's not shit.
>>12858929>Here's a FYI, I didn't actually came from Gaia.Could have fooled me. Your writing skills are pretty garbage, you type like you're fresh out of Gaia and you're obliterating any possible suspension of disbelief, which is pretty important to the thread.
If people are arguing, there's something wrong with what you're doing.
