>>14056802Sorry Momiji, I had to go to sleep before you posted that.
Thank you very much for continuing to work on this piece, I appreciate it.
I honestly have no idea what to do about it. Skyla's arm now looks too long, so if you'd like to just apply some general correction to that, I'd reccomend that. Other than that, It generally looks pretty good. They are both in very awkward positions, so I don't blame you at all if you mess up a bit.
Well, I guess I'll try to reccomend some things:
>Elesa's thigh is now fine, but it narrows out too quicklyThis woman we're talking about is almost literally 50% leg in her official artwork, she's packin' some serious thighs and legs, I've provided a suggestion, but play around with it and make it work if you prefer not to take it.
>Elesa's hair gap goes a bit too high up on her foreheadIt kinda looks like she's wearing a toupee since her hair reveals her scalp, which doesn't have hair on it. So I would move the angle of the bang on the left to a lower degree from the horizontal parallel.
>Skyla's arm is still... not quite rightHer forearm is fine, don't worry about that except in terms of position. Her bicep area though is now just too long, so I'd shorten it up a bit, which means you might have to redraw some parts of it. I can understand if you're too busy to do such a thing.
pic related is suggestions. If you'd like to, follow them loosely, since I threw them together pretty loosely.