>>58410566>Also am I really that edgy?As the guy who said it I gotta take responsibility. You have fairy pokemon this close to committing type based hate crimes, multiple characters have called the mc Gibber with a hard R, and it feels like I'm reading pokemon Beserk version and I've never read Berserk. The absurd surrealism of the main character's situation keeps it from feeling too heavy handed though. I wouldn't ask you to change anything because I feel your vision will be better without fear of trying to tone anything down. You've got a baby eldritch abomination for a main character being raised by career killers. This is genuine edge, not poser highschool shit of a kid trying to seem mature. It's just unapologetically brutal.
Also you commented I should filter morons who don't get my writing, and I agree, but that's a pretty edgy thing to say.
