>>29454692I made like half a dozen comments during the initial (phone?) conversation before I ran into dedicated writing time. I'll work through another bunch of paragraphs tomorrow, and so on. Really I'm just worried you'll pull the trigger on it before I've gotten through it, because I owe you the whole chapter instead of just bits and pieces.
if you want to beta-read my stuff I'll set up a doc for it, I've just been going without editing once my main critic and I decided it'd be more productive to do a whole rundown when the story's complete rather than chapter-by-chapter. No obligation though, I got through he first three or four chapters editorless just fineif the story even interests you. 