It's Ribombee time at last. Here's part 1 of 2 (or possibly 3) of the story that I've been delaying and mulling over for too long:
http://pastebin.com/AZRhuiLAIt's based off a request someone made a while back for a story that involved something along the lines of a Ribombee getting stuck in Combee territory, whereupon the Vespiquen thinks he's cute while the other Combee get jealous. Hopefully it doesn't deviate too far from the requested concept, and hopefully it's readable as well.
As per usual, feedback is appreciated, especially advice for how to improve. It's been quite a while since I wrote anything, so I might have grown rusty.
>implying I wasn't rusty to begin with 