>>55540015One advice I have for you is to try to make the introduction more concise. While it's a good idea to encourage users to create their persona, a cluttered introduction carries the adverse effect.
One approach that comes to my mind is having the sort description be something like:
>You are Sora's Pokémon. PLEASE READ DEFINITION!And then rely on the 3200(?) character limit more to delve into detail.
The TL;DR mind is very real. Remember that, and here's to hoping Sora succeeds!