>>19443427I feel it looks a lot better and more lively already. I've got a few more suggestions though.
The area marked in red seems to be a big empty space with no real purpose at the moment. You could maybe move the bug catcher guy over there.
I'm guessing you don't want people to access the cave up there, but if you ever want a shortcut in you could but a Rock Smash block in the orange spot to have alternative entry.
The ledge by the stair looks a lot better, but still a little awkward, if you rotated it so it was vertical instead of horizontal it would make more sense with the elevation.
