>>46785219Since this is additional plot I feel justified in critiquing it. Holy shit this is awful writing. So now it's time to fight Giovanni, and let's critique his team.
Scrafty can fit the mob-boss aesthetic of Team Rocket, but Tapu Lele? Really? That's that pokemon best suited to the Ground Type Gym Leader Mafia Boss Giovanni?
Also you're teaming up with Lance for a double battle and he leads with Dragapult, follows up with Dialga and finishes with Megamence because this hack is uncreative as fuck.
Giovanni's next mon is Excadrill and HOLY SHIT AN ACTUAL GROUND TYPE. Then it's Ttar, which... It's a rock type but I'll be kind and let it exist, Hippowdon would work and make sense but... whatevs. The Mega Mewtwo Y immediately dies to Greninja, by the way I'm using Greninja, because fuck it why not? and his final mon is Celesteela...
You know... I know why you stuck me in a double battle where I can't control half the participants. There's no way I'd ever fucking lose this using my team. Half of it dies to fucking Infernape and the other half dies to Greninja The only pokemon those two can't kill is Tapu Lele. But like... Tapu Lele can't do anything to me.
Fuckin' easy fight. And also Lance was like "I didn't bring my best I was in a rush." I guess I'm supposed to think he's cool? I don't.
