>>31099234 To be honest I'm probably going to write someone spanking him at some point no matter way, so your vote only makes me more determined >>31099335I can give you some feedback or edits if you want, although I'm not the best writer
>>31099385You have a really distinct style anon. I think you have a lot of potential, but there are definitely some weird wordings in there
I can't believe you degenerates want Lusamine getting her shit kicked in as much as some juicy almost getting caught fucking, but I'm gonna write it. It'll be easier cause it's not sex.
I'm thinking something like Lusamine's berating him for fucking up and he just loses it and gets in her face. She laughs, says he would never, he doesn't have the balls, and then he hits her and doesn't stop. She laughs through a lot of it, and it ends with him
kicking her teeth in so she'll never be beautiful again 