I finally finished my Dewott story, Dew Point. It's around 14k words. It takes place a few days after the end of Ribombee-anon's Buckle Up story. I spent way too long on this story, hopefully I'll be able to get my next ones out quicker.
https://rentry.org/iqr9yAs always, let me know if there's any mistakes or typos I missed, and if you have any criticisms.