>>35333965God shitheads with no ability to fucking draw always have the shittiest attitudes when judging drawings. Either show some of your own work or shut the fuck up. Its so tiring hearing people who dont do shit for themselves putting down people who are working on improving themselves. This guy is actually listening to suggestions too. He's taking in criticism so quit being such a fuck face. The pumpkin fakemon you posted is simultaneously uninspired and way too busy so your taste seems to be shit anyway.
>>35326994>>35327372I like the radish idea but maybe give it two root-like appendages so that there is both a little more going on and an early hint of the eventual tentacle roots of its evo.
I get you're going for a gen 1 look, and I dont inherently dislike the gen 1 'dbz eyes' but I dont think they work too well for jack o lanterns, especially if you want to evoke a ghostly vibe. Consider making they eyes glowing circles? Especially gor the first form. I think those to changes would do a lot of good for the first form.
Sharing one of my fakemon so that I am not a hypocrite. Someone requested a pincushion varient of qwilfish so I made an attempt. Fairy/Normal I think. Maybe just Normal.