>>32465486The design is better than the first one, though I did a design to try fix some of the problems that yours had.
The helmet doesn't really look too natural and appears to be sticked on. Generally, most pokemon design have more natural side going on. You could try making it blend within the body to make it more natural. The proportions seem to be tad too realistic for an first stage, the proportions could be more exaggerated and cartoony.
