>>14064115Okay. Looks good for the most part now
Outside of fixing that arm, there's really only two suggestions I've got left.
>Elesa's cheek now sticks out ridiculouslyJust a side-effect of the old drawing, I'm sure you noticed it too.
>Elesa's left headphone "spike" is in a strange positionMy suggestion might look weird. The Blue lines and circles are where your art suggests the spikes are, along with the actual "phone" itself. Given the position of where Elesa's ear SHOULD be, my red marks are where the spike SHOULD be, given the position of where the "phone" should be. Sorry if that was confusing.
>dat armI'm not even going to comment, I think you'll get it under control.
And that's about it. Sorry for my hasty commenting, I need to go pretty soon. I eagerly await seeing what you end up with as the final product. Good luck, and thank you, Momiji.