>>54805457And now finished chapter 3. I like the last line it ended on. Great chapter!
The fight in was pretty fucking cool, I think I agree with Dewott on that one, kek
I was afraid you were going to kill Melody and I was preparing myself mentally but I'm surprised she's not only alive, she's a good fighter and also an outlaw!! wtf. I'm so curious what she did to become a wanted criminal?? why didn't Dewott questioned her more!?!? Fugg.
Also, Debby was around but didn't intervene. Why? What's her role in this? What's her relationship with Melody?? So many questions...
All in all, amazing story! You have given a lot of character depth to Dewott and important insight into his relationship with Toge.
Definitely your greatest work yet, I personally think. Thank you for the kino!