>>34297052>>34297565This really isn't that different from the model. You can only see the pointed edge from a certain angle, like the DW's right needle. They ARE thin. His head is slightly tilted along with the mandibles. I don't see your problem with the mouth. The abdomen is only shaded below his head and arms, as these portraits have minimal shading anyway.
You seem to think being incredibly pedantic to suit your bias qualifies as an "argument."