>>56572320>"Baka gaijin" sounds pretty obvious, although it's not really racial, isn't it...Dumb foreigner is probably broad enough to use. And probably about as vitriolic as what Carmine actually says too.
Originally, I was thinking about adding in anal, but I couldn't properly figure out the logistics of it.
Oh and "Kieran whited out" was going to be more of a recurring thing/an extended running gag, but that didn't really pan out.
Dare I ask where else you wrote that? Also, the inspiration for this scene was a /weg/ I played quite a bit of recently lol.
I'll probably try to write something more wholesome for my next romp. 