>>56120021Their mistake is that Pokemon were treated like decorations in a Pokemon story, Bursts are your main focus, good for you, but what about people who don't use Burst, how do they use their Pokemon?, what happens in a Burst battle vs Pokemon? Do burst weapons work with Type and do they have side effects? What is the name of the region in the story? Are there native Pokeamericans?
The set had potential for incredible worldbuilding but the author did not stop sucking his protagonist's dick 24/7 and neglected other aspects of his work.