>>53798160My sides. My sides are in orbit.
Just like ElmThe entire ending scene was absolute gold. The whole monologue was expertly written, and the comedy was great.
I especially loved how Elm pops up out of literally nowhere to make a quip, Toge immediately shoryukens him into space, and then he instantly resumes his mental rant without missing a beat.
The overall feeling of comfiness and wholesomeness was also really nice. And the earlier parts of the story, with Team Cozy in the kitchen and the encounter with Beast, were good as well. Amazing job.
>>53798060It was really nice to wake up and read this. Thank you very much! I'm happy you liked the new version and the changes I made.
It was a bit tough to handle 4 main characters at once, but I tried giving them all things to say and do, especially in the boss fight. Glad to hear it paid off.
>>53797630Thanks, glad you liked the art!
And I hope you enjoy your slumber.
>>53797954It probably varies by team. Some definitely goof off more than others.
>>53799361I'm sure there are ways to tell members of the same species apart, just like in real life. Come to think of it, Magnezone may also employ psychics who can read minds and confirm they have the right guy.
>>53799675This seems like an acceptable workaround for the issue. Hopefully it won't cause you any more grief.
