Not much to say about this story segment. It just kind of /is./
I think I'm going to take the advice and leave it on a cliff hanger for me to do the experiment later. This is getting harder and harder to write by the hour.
>>58624034Okay, listen, the reason I'm deleting my posts for corrections is because posting the correction would otherwise occupy a potential bump that could be done by a story, or by discussion actually relevant to the thread.
That is the literal /last thing/ I want, and that's why if I'm unable to delete a post, I don't even post a correction in another post.
I will not stop deleting posts, but I promise to not do it as much, hopefully only once or twice per thread.
>>58627550This was a little hard for me to read, but that's probably because I was being an idiot and speed reading.
I REALLY liked the meditation aspect of this chapter. I was struggling to think of how to describe the zen of just letting things go and observing your thoughts, and you just did it perfectly. Good job kartanon.