Alright, /vpwt/, I've made another story for your viewing
displeasure. I'm still proofreading and finalizing the later parts of it, but the first chapter is here if anyone wants to check it out:
http://pastebin.com/ANw7U0n6.
This one's called "The Azure Sun Rises", and like my last story, it's based off Mystery Dungeon. It's about a Lurantis and a Stoutland making their way through a dungeon. I actually wrote it a month ago, but I recently went back and revised it with what I learned from posting "The Forest Temple" here, so hopefully it's better than outright unreadable.
And as always, any kind of feedback would be much appreciated!
