>>12808206>>12808504Self-insert witch and everyone gets aura powers (she and Ash are even more Chosen One than the movies usually makes him); small legendaries (Mew, Jirachi, etc.) are the dead brothers of Satoshi Tajiri and Arceus is Satoshi's imagination or some bullshit; Missing No. are real things that delete the Pokemon universe and represent the real Satoshi's depression. Aside from those glaring NOPEs, it has questionable grammar (which is slightly excusable because the author is ESL) and bad pacing.
If none of that deters you and you have enough time for 61 chapters of it, be my guest:
http://nenilein.deviantart.com/art/The-Pokemon-gods-Chapter1-55638679 