Previous threadstarter here. I'll repost mine because I only got 1 response/critique from the previous thread
>TypeFighting
>RoleA defensive mon that relies on utility/support moves to bring some variety in monofighting type teams instead of the usual slow bulky tank or speedy mixed sweeper roles.
>Conceptmixture of Kabuki theatrics, oni and warrior
>AbilitiesGuts, Intimidate, Provoke (HA)
Guts appears to be standard for bruiser fighting types, Intimidate due to Kabuki mask/make up, Provoke is auto-taunt ability, also due to Kabuki mask
>stat spreadHP: 105
Atk: 120
Def: 100
Sp. Atk: 45
Sp. Def: 100
Spe: 35
BST: 505
the slow speed references the slow (start) of Kabuki theatre, and so it could be of use with Trick Room, and to balance out its good bulk and good attack
>movesnothing unique but definitely has Sucker Punch to make use of the Auto-taunt ability and to avoid overlap with priority of other fighting types (Bullet/Nach punch), Close Combat, Trick Room (again to reference the theatre movements), Healing Pulse, Helping Hand, Follow Me, Me First, Fake Out
three stage line that evolves by trading
>>30893967 (OP)very interesting concept, and takes the type of Murkrow and Mandibuzz but with a different role. Very good use of the animal's anatomy and translation to abilities. My only concern is that with all these options of crippling foes, I think its offenses could be reduced by just a little bit (-5-10 on one or split offenses).
>>30894189>A strong one stage pokemon like dhelmiseSee, this part is okay.
>(540 bst)This is not. Dhelmise has 517 BST, with Grass as a detrimental type defensively. You have an excellent typing and fast speed on top of a very good BST. You have no ground priority and you can outspeed most fast ground type users. You do not fear Ice Shard, nor Aqua Jet to a debilitating degree. Only Accelrock + SR on the switch threatens you. Arcanine and Volcarona have comparable BSTs but they have less favorable typings.