>>54399535>>54399957>>54399969>>54400207>>54400320>>54401166>>54402132Thank you all for the feedback. The fact that many of you commented on the actions between Debby and Linoone really makes me happy, since those were the parts I struggled with the most. I want to make the relationship feel natural, and the moments to really feel like a real moment. I suppose I'm lucky I've got some experiences to pull inspiration from.
>>54402168>part where you said that Janitors were soulless might've pissed a certain someonekek, in my defence that part was written before you joined.
