Is the sheriff being professional? No. Would anyone be professional after having to team up with the fire department to take out a Claydol threatening the sheriff's office? Well, maybe, but not him.
I kind of noticed something funny. I did sort of intend for him to have some low level of CPTSD, but I hadn't actually begun the process of hinting towards it intentionally. However, chapter 2 and the 3 days of no sleep are actually pretty in-line from my brief checks on PTSD and CPTSD.
Oh, also I forgot to be announcing my word counts. We're up to 10,104, but I haven't begun rewriting that one Claydol section yet, and I kind of skipped over half of the Pokeball dialogue for now because I wasn't sure how to make it interesting.
So uh, Machomon, when you come back, what time zone are you in? Are you the European who announced himself earlier or something?
>>58645254I don't know enough about gambling to make comment on this, but none the less, I enjoyed the detail regardless.
I really need to learn how to play blackjack. If I play my wasp card, he's going to need a distraction to pull him out of an anxiety attack.
>>58644657You might just want to skip posting it as a green at that point. I'm not in control of your story though and I await the results eagerly regardless of what you do with it.
