>>41387818>The synopsis also doesn't help readers adjust their expectations to the actual story either.I've never been good at blurbs, and at that time, I wasn't sure if I'd cover all three phases of the story and if so if I'd separate them completely or just indicate the intermissions.
>>41387903>There's a number of reasons I disagree with thisBEEG CHIKN SMOL DOGE = CUTE. More when they tease each other. Pic related. Max adorbls.
>>41387957>I haven't read those stories so I wouldn't pick up on any of thoseBecause I can't control order of encounters, I must consider everything from both the naive and savvy approach. So I try to arrange things such that some readers pick up a story and enjoy the surprise of now realizing "what that scene in the other story was about" and other readers enjoy the surprise of a previous story's left-open questions being answered in a moment that serves to break up the monotony of the current story's A plot.
That's of course at the highest level with the relationship of LL and Eternally Vernal, since they overlap end-to-end; most people will read LL first (because of #gardevoir or because it was released years earlier) but those that take E/V first will see it as a continuous timeline and have a completely different reaction to the moments in LL when G. V. starts exercising her influences.
>>41388167>had actually really betrayed someone she cared aboutAnd, that her choices require her to keep in charge of the situation as she expected to be, because a Fire-type's reaction to a threat is completely different from a Steel-type's.
