Now that I got some rest after that whole spiel, time for me to catch up on others' stories and comments I neglected...
>>58623894>lean a bit into the latin cultural heritage it suggests.Forgot to comment on this before, but the fact you made this specific comment tells me I'm achieving something I intended to with the story.
>>58634769>My only issue would be the sheer luck involved in two siblings ending up as the same Pokemon.I know it's a bit of a copout, but sometimes, luck's just... like that irl, y'know? Which is kinda what I want to go for. Well, that and elaborating on the example churchanon brought up of whole families turning the same species as a false positive for the phenomenon being genetic, the Prinplups were just one such case.
Or were they? I did use "looked like" very intentionally.>treating evolution as an age thing when it comes to transformations?Not strictly, any mons that Kartanon doesn't directly interact with I pick moreso for their scene setting potential personally.
>>58635558>I'm alive (unfortunately).Hey, no bein' down around here! If not for your own sake, for ours! Also, interesting concept with the Megas, hope the story goes far enough to see it through! Your writing's always a great time.
>>58635824>I haven't had story ideas for anything this entire fucking week.Ah, my condolences, creative ruts are a bitch and a half, hope you can get over the slum sooner than later...
>>58635890And you too, 'course! Again, wish I'd comment more on Val but I'm somewhat waiting fo the rentry update to read it all be bulk and not be lost reading stray updates.
>>58636006I cannot stress enough how amazing of a job you do at building up these characters and their struggles, even though this all just... hurts, a lot, it's incredibly comforting seeing Copanon help Fedoark out, grappling with the extremes of Pokemon nature is hellish when they so starkly oppose human morality. She's very lucky to have an anchor like him
