>>56321576Nothing like wasting writing time on playing Pokemon Showdown. This is the last week that I will have a major amount of free time for a while, and I have abandoned all prospects of getting this "short" story done within the near future. There are now significant odds that EIF ends before I get this thing released. If I am lucky, I can get to 20K words this week, AKA halfway of what I estimate.
>>56322439What is it with bishonen bad guys and wearing multiple sets of earrings? Alex is the only one with only a single set, even Tesoro has like two or three of them, he has one on the side of his ear, which I always found odd because he's obsessed with "dignity" or something (at least according to the interview).
>>56322475We don't slick our hair back because we find hair gel to be very troublesome and destroying our hair texture.
>>56322534That glowing snowflake reminds me of the Cryo Visions from Genshin Impact.
>>56324212If those were Alex's actual clothes, he would be suffocating from how tight they are.
>>56326002>ANOTHER Ghost type specialist that doesn't use meta Ghosts>>56326691The Pestilence must be Cured.
>>56326787You may or may not be aware, but the Johto Aegislash idea was originally made by N*antcha. Also
>another Dragalge and Overqwil and Kingambit user>>56328074Nothingeverhappensbros have taken yet another W.
>>56331006I find it funny how you specified to specifically throw a coin.
>>56333263I had to look up what this was, and this is just... something
>>56335307>>56335318I genuinley think that Koa just lost interest in /tog/. He mentioned a while ago that he would be posting more often now that he finished college but since then he's only posted like once or twice.
>>56335347If possible, you should probably split the document internally into two parts. The action sequence and cooldown is "Part 2" and everything before that is "Part 1", maybe.
>>56335632>Chadvile, use Knock Off>>56336077You don't have to keep the gothic theme.
