>>54050652I read through it, and I can say I definitely think you’re being too hard on yourself. This was an enjoyable chapter. It did a good job of introducing the dungeon, and you incorporated the theme of rotation/spirals well. There were plenty of great bits of banter and character moments as well. In particular, the part where Kaiji
gets scared and breaks his suave demeanor like a cat seeing a cucumber was amusing, amplified by his teammates' reactions. And the fight scenes were done well. They had enough details to make them feel unique, like the confusion and sandstorm.
There were some typos, but nothing major. And it's true that the dungeon wasn't very interesting visually, but that's fine--especially since its repetitiveness was in service of the idea that
the dungeon is designed to torment adventurers. And it made the
change of scenery at the end even more impactful.
So I definitely wouldn't say this was useless filler or anything like that. You did well, and I remain hyped for the rest of the story!
>>54051523Go right ahead. That's what I've been doing.
>>54052365Not me. Guildmons are not for lewds. Guildmons are for hugs (especially from their partner).
>>54052841This is really cool! Nice job with the pose. I like how you drew his eye.
>>54053258Cute little story. She seems like a sweet character, and her interactions with Beast were pleasant.
>>54054074That's really cool. Glad he's happy about it.
>I hope all of you keep having fun making artHey, I like this guy. He seems nice.
>>54054708You're alive! Good to see you again.
I might as well mention that I wrote something involving your characters recently:
>>54044204>>54052920And, KFC-anon, just letting you know I wrote something in the EtF conclusion document. You can check it out whenever you get the chance.
Guess this is also a reminder for the other EtF participants to consider adding something, as well.
