>>12560819Yo!
Sorry, been doing some spring cleaning (inspections are always death).
Glad to see the final result, though I think the pupils should be done with a solid brush rather than a soft one. They also don't need to be THAT big/long. Try making the pupils about 1/3 the size you used with a solid black outline working from the center. To do this, you should put the pupils on a separate layer, use the elliptical marquee tool, fill it in then select the pupil you want to modify and use the Free Transform it until you get the desired height/width.
Also, the corner of Flannery's mouth should be open wider, the corner of her mouth closes off when we should be seeing an opening. Basically we see her upper lip floating over where her mouth opens. Visual should show what I mean.
Still though, pretty fun request I must say. I'd probably be lying if I said this should be a standalone picture... I can sort of imagine chibi figures of Ice Candice freezing some Galactic grunts and Fire Flannery spin jump fireballing both Aqua and Magma grunts or something like that.
Keep your head up, putting you into practice is showing some promise.