>>41103300Hey, different anon here. I proofread it as well. I went full autist, so some of it is stylistic/just to make it flow better, but I figured if I was going to do it I should go all out.
It looks like there are a lot of corrections but much of it is minor. Like the other anon said I didn't do this to make you feel bad or anything, just to help make it be the best it can be, because I get the feeling this image is going to get reposted a lot!