>>27329172>we never know what James profession is during the events of the story.It wasn't relevant to the plots so it never came up, but should I ever write Book 2 (which is currently no better than fourth or fifth on my to-do list), it shall be relevant then.
>copy paste sceneIt was rather blunt, but it has a purpose.
>Don't expect the reader to read everything you make in chronological orderI have a suggested order on my FFN profile, and AO3 lets me group and sort so the order is indicated by that method. The sticky bit is that I don't write them in the optimal reading order.
> And a lack of grammatical errorsMake me blush; the last time I looked at LL to verify continuity with Eternally Vernal, I found three errors in three glances. I'd kick myself if I could.
