>>58605833Just fuck my shit up. Poor copanon, hope he gets a bonus for his troubles. Man if I were better at action and not a squeamish as I am when it comes to visual gore I'd try drawing the fight between Fedoark and the Emboar, brutal but in a thrilling way, fantastic job! Hope the detention measures'll be enough for the mons they're tackling...
>>58606197Dang, left off with a nice setup, poor Hoppip, but at least he seems willing to take care of the kid. Hope he didn't drift too far from home...
>>58607284Not artsy fartsy at all! I love seeing how people interpret the ways a Pokemon mind would overlap with the human mind, and the way you explore it for a psychic type is great, really enjoy it! I'll admit I enjoy imagining "higher planes of thoughts" in writing pretty often, you've got a real good take on the Psychic-type mind!
>need more Abra pics, there are so few that aren't just game art.The wonders of niche mons at the forefront of a story, ain't it... I'm lucky I can draw pics for myself but I'll try and share any Abra fanart I find if it can help!
>>58607563>If only I could actually read stories without feeling dreadful about my own...I can at least tell you that through it all you do genuinely do a great job at putting me in poor Val's shoes. Life's rough for the guy and I just hope somehow it'll get easier for him, even if it doesn't seem likely...
>>58609310Fun trio to add to the cast! Do really like the variety, Alex seems like a bro specially. Roxanne does also seem to enjoy the show she gets to put on... Very promising ensemble, and very good intros for 'em at that!
>>58609383>Cruz is the only one that was hoping for it.I wouldn't say "hoping for" as much as "accepting of". He'd had dreams about becoming specific Pokemon, but Kartana... is a bit of a disability for him. He dreaded the idea of turning, but now that it's happened, what can you really do about it other than try and live on, right?
