Last night, I finally returned to Project Orion and started on the Special Episodes. I already played the first 3 in vanilla Sky, but I forgot a lot of details about them because it's been a long time since I played them, so it's neat to return and replay them now. I'm looking forward to seeing what the 4th and 5th are like, especially since I've heard good things about the 5th episode.
Anyway, I finished the 1st episode, Bidoof's Wish. It was decent enough. There were some fun scenes with the guild, and the ending was nice.
Team Rogue's plan was way more complicated than it needed to be, but
beating them up with help from the entire guild was fun. Also, props to Skorupi-anon for telling me to use my Frustration TM on Bidoof. That was definitely useful, since it does so much more damage than Tackle.
The ending was curious. Bidoof
wishes for new friends, and that turns out to be the hero and partner. So does that mean he actually
causes everything in the game's intro to happen? Including the hero leaving the dark future, losing Grovyle, being turned into a Pokemon, teaming up with the partner, and all that? Or was most of that already fated to happen, and Jirachi just nudged things to guarantee that the hero and partner would decide to join the guild? Kind of an interesting concept.
>>54404559>the actions between Debby and Linoone were the parts I struggled with the most>I want to make the relationship feel natural, and the moments to really feel like a real momentWell, I'd say you nailed it. You're talented at writing romance.
I'm a little jealous, lol>>54405332I don't think paragraph size is a big deal. The most important thing is to break up your paragraphs logically, so you don't ramble on and talk about multiple distinct topics in the same paragraph. Each paragraph should introduce and cover a specific idea, and if it ends up being long or short, so be it.
