>>12483715I see elements of your willingness to learn as you go. The way the arms and legs taper down shows you're conscious of implementing that and I see the way her sash folds around with those curved lines.
I do have a few more suggested adjustments.
-try adding lines to show her collarbone and maybe a more definitive line for her neck.
-Her right leg isn't quite right, red lines show an ideal placement to taper it down from the curve of her calf.
-I couldn't get a visual of it looking right, but try bending your arm and look how the skin on your forearm and bicep folds over -- notice the line that forms in that crease between them and apply that there.
I think so far this request has shown you're willing to internalize some helpful feedback, if your adjustments on the hair are anything to go by. So I do thank you for taking the request and hope it helped you along the way
Can't wait to see the colors.
