>>53684304Awesome story! I was not expecting the idea of human LARPers to develop into such a huge adventure. Btw it's not too bad but in the library part, where Cyndaquil and Torchic have a dialog, I found it kind of hard to keep track on who was saying what, might want to write a few sentences there to guide low IQ readers like me.
The clothing store part was fascinating, I loved how you described how the Ariados made measurements and handled clothing for various forms of pokemons.
I'm in love with the Russian Totodile mental imagery>I raised my trunk and trumpetedHappy to finally see phanpy trumpet in celebration.
CuteLove your stuff
>>53687059Nice choice of scene! Love his expression.
I know I'm repeating myself but it's impressive how far you've gotten at drawing in such a short amount of time desu desu>>53687239lmao
I suppose Kiyo is not "one of the good ones" for Chespin
>>53687277>>53687360>justWhat are you cooking???
>>53687419Wigglytuff would be the kind to answer the question wrong on purpose
