>>54017904Amazing work, everyone! I think this is easily the best background-based drawboard yet--maybe even the best drawboard overall. Looks like such a fun gathering, and everyone fits into the scene really well.
By the way, here's Team Brave by themselves, in case you wanted to see the rest of Sneasel.
>>54014654You probably tell the cops you accepted the job, so they know to wait at your badge's warp destination. So after you knock the crook out and/or tie them up, the cops are right there and ready to arrest them.
>>54018093I should be offended for Sneasel's sake, but this is just too funny.
>>54018626Team MLG? More like Team QT. Amazing art!
>>54018900>Ribombee-anon is the MVP for his constructive criticismOh, thanks, man! I'm just happy to help. On that topic, if you're ever interested in a beta reader, I could probably help out (unless my schedule gets too busy).
>>54021723Stop, stop! He's already dead!
Lastly: I've started reading through my slowly-growing story backlog. I've now read Togetic-anon's pancake story.
>https://rentry.org/9sy7z#pancake-pandemoniumAn enjoyable read. Good story arc and pacing overall. I think you did a nice job showing Toge improving, and the character interactions were entertaining. Also, Pika acting nice and gentle to Toge during the contest was sweet. There was good comedy as well, and I enjoyed the bit of mystery with Toge's strangely delicious pancakes.
I did feel like some sentences are a bit clunky, but nothing too bad. And I thought the Cyndaquil scene was somewhat unnecessary and dragged on a bit, slightly derailing the conclusion of the story (but at the same time, it certainly was funny).
On the other hand, I must commend that one
gif. It was an expected surprise, and pretty awesome. Did you make it? And if so, do you remember how hard it was to make, or how long it took?Anyway, a well-made story overall. Nice work, Togetic-anon.
