>>46499915I get what you're going for, one of those kanto hacks that want to make kanto feel more alive and lived in by making the towns look like towns, but with Gen 3 it straight up doesn't work. HGSS Kanto sucks for the most part but they got that town feeling right with the mapping, your area just looks way too spacious and would suck for the player to actually play through on a little GBA screen.
Have you actually playtested this map? genuine question