>>17926656Shit son, that story is pretty bad. Grammatically, it's close to flawless, but the plot, characters, and setting are God-awful. After reading through every posted chapter, I had no emotional investment in any character, and every human and Pokemon in the story has a dark/edy-as-fuck past. Just to be clear, I'm not using those as buzz words; they all of severe personal dramas. Every. Single. One. I'm also not a fan of the over-use of Legendaries and the fact that all Pokemon are basically given human-equivalent rights, can speak through the use of a 'Speak TM', and are generally treated like humans who can be enslaved if they aren't registered to somebody. If there wasn't the occasional mention of a Pokemon's species, you'd forget it was a Pokemon at all.
I would recommend a pass on that one. I mean, it's not Slash Firestorm level bad, but it's close for different reasons entirely.
