>>34690631I think it would be much better if you actually looked at proper pokemon design and style and stuck to it firmly and few deviations as possible. There's so much delta pokemon that look very unpokemon-like since that they have tons of uncessacarry features and lots of deviations from the usual style that makes them ugly and unappealing to look at.
I mean, just look at this monstrosity. It doesn't fit into general, traditional Pokemon style and world. You wanna know why?
>Unnecessary third detailed eye. >Typing that does not fit the original design very well. It would be much better off if it was Fire/Rock or Fire/Grass with a volcano or chili pepper design, which would fit it's design much better.>Unnecessary spots on the leaves, there's too much of them, which makes it too complex and unfitting for Pokemon style. Just reduce them to like 3 spots per leave>Unnecessary crystal, it would be much better off if it had a strange, mythical plant inspired from fantasy tales instead of a rock, which doesn't fit onto the original design.I also really hate the idea of Undead charizard, since it doesn't make sense as a living pokemon itself. Most ghost type pokemon make sense, because they have organic living features that makes it feel like a pokemon. I'd suggest that you should make it more organic, by having it skeleton-like features on top the original design with some features that makes it ghostly without making it seem unpokemon.
Please do make sure that you actually research the design thoroughly and well thought out. Because there's so much designs that you made that have no respect to the original idea. At least just do it something similar to regional formes, but slightly more extreme that still fits into the general pokemon style.
If you guys want to, maybe I could give you guys a hand into making nicer and better delta designs