>>56944500>>56944520>>56944452>>56944431>>56944376Noted, added to the project files.
Vaguery is an unfortunate side effect of literary ranging shots on a new setting kek
My usual writing is a lot more graphic and devolves into actual brutality more than a few times; neutering it down to Pokemon standards (again my kids might read this at some point) is a bit difficult. I could write a graphic, gritty, and realistic version but I'm not interested in that for this project ATM. I know some people really like that stuff, but that's not really pokemon to me. I already do that on the daily, looking for something a bit more true to the source material as opposed to graphic realism with minimal suspension of disbelief.
Also, I really appreciate anon sticking up for me here. That said I assure you my comment section even from readers that really like my stories can be absolutely fucking brutal sometimes. Most authors have skin thicker than an elephant because you only need to be literate to critique writing so everyone can do it. Fucking weird that /vp/ has more chill than the rest of the internet in that regard though. Other than a few traditional kys yourself replies it's been really constructive.
Working on a bit of a more serious opener right now I'll post a pastebin when I'm done.
