Alright, this has taken way too long
https://rentry.org/thedayoffI have never written a story so focused around normal conversations so this made good practice. Thanks to everyone who betaread this story, especially Booker. His comments helped me realize why my dialogue's so tedious to read. Still not that happy with it but I need to stop working on this.
Also, if you notice any issues with formatting or spelling please let me know. I was having issues with typing and I tried to fix them today. Been having issues focusing on stuff because of medical issues I don't wanna get into so I don't know if I caught everything
no drawing for this so here's someone else's art