Ive been readin a buncha stories! Here's my most recent reviews!
>>56263057Always love me a Great Bulk story :)! Lombre is a great villain but I do kinda wish we had more time with Makky and Asana. I love those two lots -u-!!
mushroom forest is a good dungeon idea! It was real tense, but it was awesome watching Makky go BEASTMODE >:). And the little human section at the start was cool :]Overall a great read :)! I'm still hooked on this series. Will they ever reach the guild? Will they truly be safe?
>>56262013This story is awesome! It's such a cool way to introduce the characters, and tying it into existing clover lore is fucking awesome >:)!!!
I especially liked seeing the consequences of the fire, I think you executed it perfectly. All the reactions and developments seemed spot on believable!The art is also amazing! I love the style :]
It's a GOATED intro and I look forward to seeing more :]!!
>>56256538I liked this story a lot! It's very interesting watching these two characters interact.
I like how Elias is clearly a human to us readers... But not as clearly to Dylus -u- I noticed you did a very good job setting the scene, I always had a pretty good picture of what was going on in my head :)! I don't think I have any major critiques, but I'm a little confused as to why Dylus is helping Elias in the first place. I'll go back and read chapter 1 again... Maybe I missed something
-u- Great story anon! Are there plans for it to tie onto clover lore at all, or just a standalone series? All good either way :)
>>56264347LOL
>>56264809What a great smile! :D
>>56265215Lmaoooo
>>56268442I'm HYPED! >:]
