>>46042151>>46042241>>46044363I will agree I worked into 5 in the morning so that's why the grammar is shite, that is my bad for not waiting until morning so I could type better.
But speaking on the topic of the coupon?
I do agree with your sentiment that it works with any store IS kinda dumb, making it work from a company perspective is way better and possibly just one company. it wasn't due to her family's graces that she got the card, it was that she found it, I'll probably look more at the list of companies in the pokemon world and see whats suited the coupon/voucher since I don't know much about them at all. maybe you can suggest some?
As for her wealth?
I'm running the characteristics of a noble in DND, she doesn't know her responsibilities yet or how important her family name is but most high society and some common folk avoid her displeasure. She possibly has a wealth on her currently but though time she loses it going to 5-star restaurants and buying expensive clothing, she'll probably need to budget herself before she loses all her money
She'll have to find her own wealth out in the world
but thanks for the criticism, I'll make some changes here and there but maybe you can town you notch down being passive-aggressive, I understand you're providing criticism to certain characters but theres a way to do it.
