>>23371506you might have a point. I may have exhausted myself at the end of the chapter so I expected a bit of a mes in the last chapter. when I get time I'll look over it again.
>>23387799Chapter 3 has a different focus compared to the other chapters, so they will remain separate. as for the . . ., I have poor eyesight, so the extra space allows me to see the ellipses should I go back to revise. so think of it as a preference like what cge said in
>>23388270>>23372150I remember when I previewed the first chapter I was advised to cut back on the use of capitals.
