>>23368558>Tobias matchupI lost it.
Few questions: Chapter 3 seems very short compared to the other chapters. Perhaps it can be merged with Chapter 2 to even it out?
Also, correct me if I'm wrong, but I think there is a difference between using ... and . . . when someone is talking. I think the ... is used in speech more while the spaced ellipse is used for when dialogue is implied to be ongoing.