>>57240758Well, it's pretty rough and somewhat nonsensical, but I think I got the basics.
It feels like a tabletop campaign plot, and if you know, you know.
As it's laid out here, there's not a whole lot of narrative cohesion going on; it's just a series of events that happen so the next event can happen. If you squint your eyes hard enough, there's a central theme of having something to live for.
>Grym finding herself after getting a second chance at life>Circe being a gardener who creates life>Hali living life to the fullest and motivating others as a performer>Cain who doesn't feel worthy of living>Gray who wants to be the arbiter of who lives>Polara desperately needing a reason to live>Midori, who doesn't need any reason at all to be aliveBut ironically I'm not seeing a whole lot here to actually motivate them to come together or move from one scene to the next. Truly, All the world's a stage, And all the men and women merely players.
It's a'ight.
