>>17005554Well there are several things that don't sound quite right;
First off the "bassline" so to speak doesn't sound full-circle, and by that I mean the first 2 measures of the line don't sound consonant; they sound like they're going no-where. on the other hand you're making the next 2 measures sound good. I'd say keep with the later 2 measures and replace the content of the first 2. By that I mean keep the harmonic content(like the chord, the bass note itself) but change up the other notes in the sequence so it sounds more rounded and digestable.
The next thing is that you start your melody off well, but then it starts getting too disjunct, jumping all over the place with no purpose or achievable effect. Considering you wanted this to be a town theme, you have to make it feel "at home", however simple the melody may actually seem, try to think step-wise(as in C to D, F to G) instead of skipping and leaping(A to D, B to F) again, you exhibit it in the beginning of the melodic line but you lose it as you go up the octave. This only becomes more apparent as that accordion comes in and you just seem to be jumping all over the place; which would be great if you were going to make the listener feel unsettled, but again, you're trying to make them feel at home, at ease with themselves.
Finally, you're going to want more harmonic content in your music as a whole, as all that's really happening is the same 4 measure bassline throughout the song. GRANTED that's okay if you could make the melodic content in the song REALLY interesting, but I would suggest having more than one section of music(A section, repeat A section, transition, B section, small bridge for the loop, rinse, repeat)
I hope you're still here/ I could help.
Also, I'm taking requests to write something for the project. it could be ANYTHING you want.