>>56943089I don't know the term for it, but you way overuse things like
>supposed to be>seemed to be>looks like>sounds like>seemed like>reminded ofIt's like you're afraid to describe things directly and instead describe things that they're like. This might sound nitpicky, but imagine the difference between
>The cape was blueand
>The cape looked like it was blueand you can maybe see how constantly describing things that way becomes grating.
Also unless I misread it, I think you said that Dragonite was a legendary pokemon? 0/10 see me after class.
