>>29627119>>29643102>On that note, I'm living dangerously and starting the next chapter before I've done the editing pass on this one.Guess I lied; now that I've got my head on that track all I can think about is rewriting this thing.
I'm taking the chapter down for an overhaul. I'm not sure I'll be finished tonight considering how much work needs to be done, but if I'm not then it'll surely be done tomorrow.
Hopefully I can get it in before the thread expires, so I don't fuck up the recap.